中考英語(yǔ)應(yīng)用文寫作技巧指導(dǎo)

應(yīng)用文主要包括信函、電郵、日記、通知、廣告、電話等形式，它要求考生不僅能表達(dá)題中的主要內(nèi)容，還能夠正確地運(yùn)用各種文本格式進(jìn)行規(guī)范的書(shū)寫，這也是考生對(duì)于英語(yǔ)傳統(tǒng)文化了解多少的反映。因此，考生應(yīng)在臨考前系統(tǒng)地復(fù)習(xí)各種文本格式以及打電話的規(guī)范用語(yǔ)，以做到處變不驚、百戰(zhàn)百勝。

[例3]寫一封信給你在云南省西雙版納市的筆友李帆，告訴他你很愿意與他交朋友，并邀請(qǐng)他到上海來(lái)旅行。

審題：該題要求考生以規(guī)范的信件格式來(lái)書(shū)寫，并把題中所出現(xiàn)的信息點(diǎn)都涵概在內(nèi)。建議考生可把題目中的信息點(diǎn)都一一劃出，以免發(fā)生遺漏。

學(xué)生作文：

Lifan

Xishuangbanna Yunnan Province China May 25th, 20xx

Dear Lifan,

Thank you for your letter. I'm glad to be your pen-friend. We are the same years old, but we were born in different places. In my imagination, Xishuangbanna is a very beautiful place. There are a lot of plants and animals. You know I look forward to visiting Xishuangbanna. Would you like to come to Shanghai? I'd like to invite you to Shanghai in summer holiday. Shanghai is also a beautiful place. It is a modern city. There are a lot of interesting places such as the Oriental Pearl TV Tower, the Bund, and Nanjing Road Walkway.

If you come here, I will show you around Shanghai. You can live at my home and my mother will cook you much delicious food. Let's be best friends!

Yours sincerely,

Xiaomin

教師擬評(píng)分：9分

[例4]寫一篇題為"A Visit Toxxxxx"的日記。

審題：該題為半命題式作文。考生除了要注意運(yùn)用正確的日記格式，還可根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)驗(yàn)和熟悉程度來(lái)選擇、確定文章的.主題.

學(xué)生作文：

May 25th, 20xx sunny

A Visit To Jinmao Building

Jinmao Building has Chinese traditional styles and it is also modern. It is the signal construction of Shanghai. It is located in the center of Lujiazui Financial Area. Our family visited Jinmao Building today.

The traffic there is very convenient. You can got here by tunnel and No.2 subway. And if you live near it, you can walk there just like our family. We went to the eighty-eighth floor of Jinmao Building. We saw the whole view of Shanghai there. Please come to Jinmao Building, and you will get some unexpected gains there.

教師評(píng)析：整篇作文主題明確，對(duì)于金茂大廈的描述也較具體，文中"the signal construction"一詞是全文的亮點(diǎn)。但整篇文章的層次不夠清晰，句子也以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，對(duì)于參觀這一動(dòng)詞的闡述還不夠充分。

教師擬評(píng)分：8分

Outline;1.a thing between my teacher and me 2.my feelings 3.show thanks to my teacher Keywords: learn English, difficult, encourage, thank Dear Miss Gao,

As you know ,I’ve made great progress with your help. At this moment ,I want to say “Thank you.”

I still remember when I began to learn English. I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried ,I still couldn’t do well in it ,I lost my confidence and almost gave it up. As soon as you knew it , you had a long talk with me kindly about how to learn English well. You always encouraged me whenever I made a little progress. Ever since then I have been interested in it and improved myself a lot.

Though I have to say goodbye to you very soon , I still think I am so lucky to be your student . I hope you can relax yourself and keep healthy. Best wishes to you ! Yours Li Lei